Friday, September 21, 2012

BROKEN ANGEL ......THE JOURNEY BEGINS{1}


      

      Jake was returning home after a long time, of about five years. His heart was pounding faster and faster as he was getting close by the city. By seeing those views of his city, he recalled his parents, his friends and most importantly his love, his life, without whom it was hard to bear every passing minute with increasing times. Jake was making assumptions about Veronica (how she would be? ,”she will be very angry ,but as soon as I will see her ,I will hug her and kiss on her forehead, saying sorry for the long wait.”).Jake was extremely excited.


  Bechaniyan hai, sansein ruki hai ;

tanhayion mein teri kami hai ;

                                     kaise hai yeh pal kat-te nahi hai…     

There was a bitter truth that annoyed Jake, but at the moment he could not think about anything but his love “VERONICA”.
                     At the other side Veronica once so charming, lively had turned into an introvert. She would now, never speak to anyone. Anyone who came home to meet her would have to return empty handed. Veronica was now considered to be a snobbish woman, ill tempered who did no longer cared about anything but herself. But in reality, day by day Veronica was dying, she was losing her confidence. Daily torture made her lifeless. She was nothing but a toy with whom her husband could play whenever he wanted. It was a lifelong prison for Veronica, with no way to escape.she was angry with everyone…She was used to think
“Aise bhi hum jeeyengae kabhi socha hi nahi ,jo sapne toot jaaye who judte phir nahi,dusti hai yaadon ki parchaiya teri,awwara is dil ki koi manzil hi nahi”
                        
                                  Fate was ready to play the game again….JAKE REACHED THE CITY…….his passion took him to Veronica’s  home straight away. Unknown of the joke, which fate has played with him, he knocked the door “knock knock!!!”  ..
He couldn’t wait but meet the love of his life. A feeling of excitement and awkwardness was something Jake couldn’t resist.
Dressed in a white gown, wearing an over jacket, wrinkled face and shivering hands, an old lady Martha opened the door.
Martha was the very lady, who was given shelter by Veronica unlike others. Post the death of Martha’s husband, she lived and cared for Veronica’s house .Before leaving Veronica told Martha “This house is like a child to me, I have has some very beautiful memories with this house, take care of my child”. With tears in her glittering eyes, Veronica left with a promise to come back one day before taking her last breath.
Martha being new to the place didn’t recognize Jake. Seeing a young handsome man carrying his luggage on his shoulders,  Martha said to him “there is no space for strangers, who are you?, who sent  you here?”. Jake didn’t knew what to say. He said “Can I speak to Veronica? I am a close friend of her’s ”.
Martha answered “I guess you haven’t met her for a long time ,she got married  three years ago, she doesn’t live here anymore.What a lucky lass (young woman)!”. Jake was shocked.

“Will jake be able to sustain the truth?, Will he now meet Veronica?. Will he forget her/hate her? ,Will he ever understand what was Veronica’s situation and reason to marry the man?”.
 WILL HE ABLE TO HELP  VERONICA  OR WILL HE  MOVE ON??

WAIT ISN'T OVER!!!!!!

1 comment:

  1. the story is touching heights, let's see how far it will go...

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